ESLW - I

I told you I'd start posting these. And yes, the chapters are HUGELY long. I nailed 25k words in this book in only 5 chapters. And, if some of the reading is choppy, please tell me. I had to separate all the paragraphs because the indentation wouldn't transfer over from Word.

But anyway, tell me what you think! It's pretty normal to start off, though I took lots of time to drag out the important, thoughtful details. I'll put up Chapter II tomorrow or on the weekend.